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KoD Page 3 by wolffoxin

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Well, i have to say this is an amazing piece. Briliantly drawn and colored. The father on the last box looks like a cat, though. Maybe elongate the muzzle a little more, and change the eyes to look more dog like. They look like slitted cats eyes. ^^'
The daughter's ears look a little too long in the second and fourth boxes, try shortening them just a little bit. But all in all, this is a very good piece of art. :) I cant wait for the next one! The suspense is killing me! :O You are such a good artist! You are a deviant art Master! (see my deviant ID for details)
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for your input! <3
His head is facing away and since it's not a side view the full muzzle doesn't show, but I did make a bit too short and rounded. ^^; I'll keep that in mind for next time I draw this pose.
They look like cat eyes? Like are they too slitted or is it the fact that I left the pupils uncolored to exaggerate the eyes more? :?
Her ears are actually supposed to be extremely long, her design was partially based off Anubis and I really liked the look of the long ears. XD In chapter 2 her ears become a bit shorter in comparison because she kind of grows into them, as right now she's still a puppy. But yeah they are very long. XDD
Aww thank you! <3
Haha I am actually working on the next page right now, and I realized made Shiva's ears even longer, woops. XD
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Bluestarfirejay Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Too slitted on the eyes. XD srry for not mkin it clear. and cant wait to see th next page!:D
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah okay, will work on that for the next page~ :3
Finishing it today @ twelve, will be livestreaming it~ :D
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Bluestarfirejay Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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