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KoD Page 3 by wolffoxin

Well, i have to say this is an amazing piece. Briliantly drawn and colored. The father on the last box looks like a cat, though. Maybe elongate the muzzle a little more, and change the eyes to look more dog like. They look like slitted cats eyes. ^^'
The daughter's ears look a little too long in the second and fourth boxes, try shortening them just a little bit. But all in all, this is a very good piece of art. :) I cant wait for the next one! The suspense is killing me! :O You are such a good artist! You are a deviant art Master! (see my deviant ID for details)
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wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for your input! <3
His head is facing away and since it's not a side view the full muzzle doesn't show, but I did make a bit too short and rounded. ^^; I'll keep that in mind for next time I draw this pose.
They look like cat eyes? Like are they too slitted or is it the fact that I left the pupils uncolored to exaggerate the eyes more? :?
Her ears are actually supposed to be extremely long, her design was partially based off Anubis and I really liked the look of the long ears. XD In chapter 2 her ears become a bit shorter in comparison because she kind of grows into them, as right now she's still a puppy. But yeah they are very long. XDD
Aww thank you! <3
Haha I am actually working on the next page right now, and I realized made Shiva's ears even longer, woops. XD
Bluestarfirejay Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Too slitted on the eyes. XD srry for not mkin it clear. and cant wait to see th next page!:D
wolffoxin Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah okay, will work on that for the next page~ :3
Finishing it today @ twelve, will be livestreaming it~ :D
Bluestarfirejay Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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