KoD Page 3by ~wolffoxinCommentsThanks so much for your input! <3
His head is facing away and since it's not a side view the full muzzle doesn't show, but I did make a bit too short and rounded. They look like cat eyes? Like are they too slitted or is it the fact that I left the pupils uncolored to exaggerate the eyes more? Her ears are actually supposed to be extremely long, her design was partially based off Anubis and I really liked the look of the long ears. XD In chapter 2 her ears become a bit shorter in comparison because she kind of grows into them, as right now she's still a puppy. But yeah they are very long. XDD Aww thank you! <3 Haha I am actually working on the next page right now, and I realized made Shiva's ears even longer, woops. XD |
The daughter's ears look a little too long in the second and fourth boxes, try shortening them just a little bit. But all in all, this is a very good piece of art.